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DesERTED a Jonas Brother horror story ch.17

Feb-6-2010

Hey guys! Wow, sorry, I noticed it says Chapter 17 lol it’s actually Chapter 19. My bad! Anyways….. here is the highly anticipated finale of DeSERTED a Jonas Brother horror story. You guys have been awesome and it’s been so much fun writing this. Crazy Love has a couple more chapters to go before that’s done also. I do have two stories started that I’ll probably start posting after CL is done. If you guys ever have any idea for a story that’d you’d like written let me know because you guys are why I write ( lol that sounded really cheesy ) so i want to write what you want to read! Alright, back to the story…………..

Kevin stared in horror at the room full of bones. Skulls sat grinning wickedly at him. He backed up and slammed the door and ran down the hallway and tried the other door again. He banged on it until his knuckles began to bleed, because at the other end of the hall, the doorknob began to turn……..

Nick ran down the hall.
” Andrea!”
He saw Andrea on the ground and he ran over and knelt down next to her.
” Andrea, wake up! Please!”

” There’s only one way you guys can stop this and get out of here alive.”
Haley and Joe looked at Elisa.
” How?”
Elisa turned and started walking down the hall, fading with every step.
” Only love can fight evil.”

The door at the end of the hallway slowly opened and Kevin sunk to the floor, waiting for his impending doom.

” Andrea! Please!”
Nick cradled Andrea in his arms and his tears began to fall. Andrea slowly opened her eyes and she smiled weakly.
” Nick…. I’m dead aren’t I?”
Nick laughed through his tears of relief.
” No.. you’re not dead.”
” Where is everyone?”
Nick shook his head sadly.
” I don’t know.”
A thud at the end of the hall made both Andrea and Nick look. Esme walked silently towards them, Another thud at the other end of the hall revealed another dark figure emerging from the shadows. Andrea sighed and looked up at Nick.
” This is it isn’t it?”
Nick nodded and he tucked a strand of hair behind Andrea’s hair. She sat up as Esme began to sing and Nick smiled sadly.
” Andrea?”
She looked at him.
” Yeah?”
” I love you.”
Andrea smiled.
” I love you too.”
She leaned in and they kissed. As soon as their lips touched a bright light filled the hotel.

When Andrea came too she noticed everyone else was getting up slowly also. They stood together and stared at the empty field in front of them. Kevin held Claire closely to him and Haley had her head on Joe’s shoulder. Nick and Andrea had their fingers intertwined. A solid white cross stood in front of them with three words inscribed on it.

Love Always Prevails………….

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  1. Mrsclic Said,

    this story has a …
    this story has a really good moral and so did the sequel to this one and the sequel to the sequel to this one.
    i

  2. pokemonwarrior10134 Said,

    you know this kinds …
    you know this kinds reminds me of an Episode of Avater the Last Airbender cause Anga and Kutiara kissed and it made light

  3. LoveJonass1 Said,

    Love the story :)
    Love the story :)

  4. solarsonic928 Said,

    5 Stars!!!This was …
    5 Stars!!!This was an awesome story!!!

  5. TheTwilightTwins232 Said,

    I’m in shock.
    I’m in shock.

  6. ilovenickjonas52794 Said,

    ummm im in total …
    ummm im in total shock

  7. DanceRocks001 Said,

    WHOOAA! Oh my …
    WHOOAA! Oh my goodness! I love the ending!!!!!! :O :D

  8. filipgurl Said,

    AMAZING! Wow
    AMAZING! Wow

  9. bennyboy9012 Said,

    O M G!!!! God that …
    O M G!!!! God that was AMAZING!!!

  10. soccerchick803 Said,

    i read that last …
    i read that last line and i got chills!!

  11. Roseyp26 Said,

    okay i am going to …
    okay i am going to warn all my friends to not read this at night but to definitly read it i loved it!!

  12. sweetlollypop1996 Said,

    wooww errr …
    wooww errr woooww

    thts all i can say

    tht is truly amazing

    woow

  13. hippysk8chick Said,

    that was the most …
    that was the most AMAZING story tht ive read. srsly

  14. kamirules123 Said,

    I am scared to….. …
    I am scared to……uh,,…..DEATH RIGHT NOW!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!

  15. ashtonwheat Said,

    I love this story! …
    I love this story! You are so good! Freaky, but a wonderful ending!

  16. beautynbell Said,

    That was amazing. …
    That was amazing. Totally freaky, but amazing!

  17. ZashleyandTroypay3 Said,

    That was amazing! …
    That was amazing! Fantantic! Outstanding!

  18. LozzieBobFred Said,

    Woah…That was… …
    Woah…That was…deep.
    I loved it! You are an amazing writer! I love your stories :D

  19. Gabriella4500 Said,

    That was awesome!

    That was awesome!
    And im glad no one died!

  20. puffball4231 Said,

    eventually someone …
    eventually someone should compile the whole series and publish it

  21. InlovewithaJonas624 Said,

    okay good lol
    i …

    okay good lol
    i was jw

  22. AussieGirl411 Said,

    you are the best …
    you are the best writer!!! This was absolutely amazing!! I can’t wait to read the sequal!!!!!!!

  23. iluvjonasbros564 Said,

    I just saw that u …
    I just saw that u have a sequel! i cant wait to read it!! i hope i dont have nightmares tonight! maybe ill read the other series in the morning sometime!lolz

  24. iluvjonasbros564 Said,

    WOW! that was …
    WOW! that was awesome i read the whole 19 chapters in like a half an hour! and my mom is like yelling at me to get off the computer! but i told her i HAD to finish this series lol! I LOVED IT!!!

  25. alleygirl102396 Said,

    yes he did
    yes he did